Figurative language says one thing in terms of another. Naming a device is worth nothing on its own; saying what it does is the whole game.

DeviceWhat it isWhat to ask
SimileComparison with like or asWhat does the comparison import?
MetaphorOne thing is anotherWhat is claimed by making it identity rather than likeness?
PersonificationHuman qualities to the non-humanWhat does the text want us to treat as having intent?
HyperboleDeliberate exaggerationWhose exaggeration — the writer’s or the character’s?
UnderstatementDeliberate flatteningAlmost always ironic; what is being held back?
OxymoronTwo contradictory words joinedWhere a character’s mind is in two places at once
ParadoxA statement that contradicts itself and is trueUsually the text’s central problem, compressed
AllusionA reference to another text or eventWhat does it borrow, and does the borrowing hold?
ImageryLanguage aimed at the sensesWhich sense, and what pattern do the images make?

The oxymoron test case

Romeo’s early speeches are stuffed with them: “brawling love”, “loving hate”, “heavy lightness”. A weak paragraph names them. A strong one notices that they cluster while he is in love with Rosaline and largely vanish afterwards — the device is characterising a pose, not a passion.

Motifs

A motif is a repeated image or idea that accumulates meaning: light and dark, poison and medicine, hands. See Symbol and Motif for how to track one properly.

The device hunt

A paragraph listing five devices explains none of them. Take one, quote four words, and spend three sentences on what it does. That is the paragraph that earns the mark.

Curriculum connection

B2.3

identify a variety of elements of style in texts and explain how they help communicate meaning and enhance the effectiveness of the texts (e.g., determine the differences in meaning or effect when the same symbol, such as the sun or water, is used in two different poems; compare the images, symbols, and literary devices used in an Aboriginal myth and a Greek myth; explain how a mythical allusion in a piece of literature or an advertisement enhances the theme or message; determine what effects are achieved in works by two different authors, one of whom uses a variety of sentence types while the other does not)

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C2.3

use appropriate descriptive and evocative words, phrases, and expressions to make their writing clear, vivid, and interesting for their intended audience (e.g., identify concrete, specific words they can use to depict objects and events vividly and with exactness; identify long-winded expressions they can replace with more concise language)

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